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Sometimes when you get bored at work, you have to take inspiration from whatever is at hand. Or in hand in this case.
sweet peas are made of these
who am I to substitute?
traveled the lasagna and its seven layers
everybody's looking for munchiessome of them have meat and sauce
some of them have ricotta cheese
some of them have spinach leaves
some of them have tofurkey toosweet peas are made of these
who am I to substitute?
traveled the lasagna and its seven layers
everybody's looking for munchiesHere is my rewrite of The Hand That Feeds ~ NIN. Also a good idea to listen to the track too to get the flow of this rewrite. Enjoy!* * * * * * * * * *
The Paw That Feeds – D. McCloud
You keep up the pace
Don't fall behind
Got your spirits up high and never declined
Because you do as your told
But inside your soul is put up for sale, now sold
Just how much can you perceive?
Will you nom the paw that feeds?
Will you chew until he pleads?
Can you rise above and leave?
Are you brave enough to achieve?
Do you want to break this?
What if this whole blockade…
Is not as portrayed…
Behind the scenes you see you've been swayed
For all your time…
They've crossed the line…
Now it's time to go kill off all the swines!
Just how much can you perceive?
Will you nom the paw that feeds?
Will you chew until he pleads?
Can you rise above and leave?
Are you brave enough to achieve?
Do you want to break this?
I don't believe…
I keep wasting time with what I should deceive
Now I see…
But I keep on trying and trying and trying and trying!
[8x]
Will you nom the paw that feeds you?
Will you chew until he pleads?
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– NIN is a musical group and anything in this rewrite that may have any similarity to the original song is truly of inspiration and not copying –
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Sounds like “Could You Bite the Hand?” by Steve Conte. This is very good.Good, better, best. Never let it rest. Till your good is better, and your better is the best.
Poetry is power.
People should not be afraid of their governments. Governments should be afraid of their people.ThePoetryNinja said:Sounds like “Could You Bite the Hand?” by Steve Conte. This is very good.
Thank you, P. Ninja!
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MNFurs Photography Department Staff - Photography and capturing moments is what we do at our events for our community. Let's chat about your photography needs!
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Furry Migration Staff ~ Photography - A will be a wandering staff photographer at FM this year. Want a photo or two or more? I'll be around!
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This next one is the re-write to a song called The New Fu** You ~ Street Sweeper Social Club. I suggest listening to the song first to get the feel and flow of it. I hope people like this one as I had a lot of fun re-writing it.* * * * * * * * * *
The Wild Fu** You ~ D. McCloud
– DEDICATED TO FURRIES EVERYWHERE –
Fursuiting is the new dress up
Head pats are the new '’what'’s up’'
Fur piles are the new group hug
Conventions are always a '’yup'’
Protests are the new way to whine
Walk around with your bad sign
They hate, but I'm feeling fine
They try, but won't intertwine
We make our own promise land
Our tails are the new contraband
Ones who like lend paw to hand
The protesters will not understand
The swarm of us is the new evolution
Our population is the new solution
We march onward to raise awareness
Come and see our new revolution!
Up and down the streets, marching two by two
And our fursonas are the wild fu** you…
The wild fu** you!
Up and down the streets, what are you to do?
And our fursonas are the wild fu** you…
THE WILD FU** YOU!
Yip yaps are the new cat calling
Dog barks are the new wolf howling
A cat's hiss is the new '’let's dance'’
All over you she will be gnawing
Grooming is the new hair brushing
Face hiding is the new form of blushing
Fur loss is the new 'I'm molting'
Nudging soft is the new form of nuzzling
We make our own promise land
Our tails are the new contraband
Ones who like lend paw to hand
The protesters will not understand
The swarm of us is the new evolution
Our population is the new solution
We march onward to raise awareness
Come and see our new revolution!
Up and down the streets, marching two by two
And our fursonas are the wild fu** you…
The wild fu** you!
Up and down the streets, what are you to do?
And our fursonas are the wild fu** you…
THE WILD FU** YOU!
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– Street Sweeper Social Club [SSSC – Tom Morello & Boots Riley] is a musical group. Anything having any similarity to the original is purely of inspiration and not copying –
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Been listening to the song Midnight City by M83 a lot lately. While listening to it for the tenth time today I realized my morning needed some decompression and this song was the right tool to work me through it.(I highly recommend checking out the original song
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Waiting for the bus
Waiting for a ride in the dawn
This living city wakes
Look and see her blood, it churns
Waiting on the bus
Waiting for a spark in the dark
Drinking in the air
Following the pale blue line
Waiting for a roar
Looking at my pulsating lifeline
The city is my church
It baits me with an unsure certainty
Waiting in a chair
Waiting for the passing of time
Waiting in a chair
Fighting with the passing of time
Waiting in a chair
Wishing for the passing of time
Waiting in a chair
Rebelling at the passing of time
Waiting in a chair
Waiting for a ride through the darkI was very bored, and this killed about 5 minutes. Hehe.Slightly NSFW.
Like A Virgin/Like A Furry
I made it through the convention!
Somehow I made it through!
Didn’t know what a furry was,
Until I found you!I was beat incomplete!
I’d seen your fur, it was white and blue
But you made me feel
Yeah, you made me feel
Fluffy and new!Like a furry!
Yiffed for the very first time!
Like a furry!
When your tail wags!
Next to mine!Gonna give you all my cuddles, furs!
My tail is waggin’ fast!
Been waggin’ it all for you!
Cause only love can last!You’re so fine and you’re mine
Make me strong, yeah you make me bold
Oh your fur fluffed out!
Yeah, your fur fluffed out!
What was fuzzy and warm!Oooh, oooh, oooh!
You’re so fine and you’re mine
Ill be yours till the end of time
Cause you made me feel,
Yeah, you made me feel,
I’ve been furry this whole time!Like a furry, yiff, yiff!
Like a furry!
Feels so good inside! <– Original song lyric.
When you hold me, and your tail wags, and you yiff me!Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh!
Ooh, baby!
Cant you see my tail wag?
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