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– Dedicated to the MNFurs community –
This is the final part to the We Are Minnesota poems. This again incorporates fur names from the board with the continued theme from PART II. Enjoy everyone!
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We continue the bus ride, going into the night
Pepper gets us going quickly without a fight
Was quite the sight as NorFox joins him
No need for any fright so let's enjoy the flight
Ski Sharp howls with very high excitement
Another joins in as the ears of Furfang perk up
Shaw-Kun stirs us all up with great incitement
Nothing strange here so please, no predicaments
Zepaw turns things up with music by Paper Route
That's what it's all about so dance and then shout
Shiroi dances down the bus aisle, acting cool
Don't be jealous now, don't give me the rude snout
Poetry Ninja shares some words with the group
Hyperyote calms us down to listen to his words
The words heard and Kae and Yarrick get the scoop
Music is up once again with dancing in one fell swoop
We are the night as time is not important now
We are a community that is so much more
We party up and down I-35 as we all know how
We are the Minnesota furs knocking on your door
©2012 ~ DrakeM
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Pepper, NorFox, Ski_Sharp, Furfang, Shaw-Kun, Zepaw, Shiroi_Ashi, The Poetry Ninja, Kurst Hyperyote, Kae, & Yarrick are the property of their original creator(s)
– Paper Route is a musical group –
NEXT –> The Silver Bullet [Poem about my character]
TO FOLLOW –> Wolf in Minneapolis [The Howling Rework]
LATER –> I'm Afraid of Furries [Final Rework Feat. Leon Red Fox]
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I'm energetic? wait I howl? 😉 Yet another great poem!You are are energetic and you do howl. HahaI am glad you enjoyed reading it.
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MNFurs Events Department Co-Head - Events are the main driving factors of the organization. Have an event you want brought to life? Let us know!
MNFurs Photography Department Staff - Photography and capturing moments is what we do at our events for our community. Let's chat about your photography needs!
Midwinter Frolic Staff ~ Photography - Midwinter Frolic is a fun winter camping event down at Whitewater State Park. Attending and have some photography ideas? Let's chat sometime!
Furry Migration Staff ~ Photography - A will be a wandering staff photographer at FM this year. Want a photo or two or more? I'll be around!
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This poem is kind of fun, but it sounds like how you explained me was that my words are powerful and important to hear, but quickly brushed over for other things. A little silly. Overall, this poem has meaning for everyone, but it needs a little better flow in order to make it wonderful.Good, better, best. Never let it rest. Till your good is better, and your better is the best.
Poetry is power.
People should not be afraid of their governments. Governments should be afraid of their people.ThePoetryNinja said:This poem is kind of fun, but it sounds like how you explained me was that my words are powerful and important to hear, but quickly brushed over for other things. A little silly. Overall, this poem has meaning for everyone, but it needs a little better flow in order to make it wonderful.
Thank you for the honest feedback. Forgive me for brushing over you right away…Just trying to incorporate as many furs as I could into a small poem. When it came to this part and part II, everything was improvised and pieced together to just be fun, hence using board members randomly in silly ways…Part I, however, was more MNFurs history-based. I was not happy overall with how part III came out, but I gave it closure in the end. Perhaps I can redeem myself later with another fun one for everyone with a smoother feel *wink*.
Thanks for the feedback again and for enjoying it!
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Furry Migration Staff ~ Photography - A will be a wandering staff photographer at FM this year. Want a photo or two or more? I'll be around!
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